A Dear Maeve romance
Notes Toward a Second Language
Her ex-husband is the only person who can finish their dead friend's last novel. The will says: same pages, same room, six months.
By Honora Vale
Completed · 18 chapters · Warm
Every chapter free
Two translators, divorced, are left a dead friend's last novel on one condition: they finish it together, in one room, in six months.
Warm: Sensual tension; intimacy fades to black. For adults 18+.
Her letter to Maeve
Dear Maeve,
There is an Italian verb, mancare, that turns the sentence round: not I miss you but you are missing from me, as if the absence were yours to account for and not mine to carry. I taught it in the first seminar I gave after the divorce and had to leave the room before I finished the example.
Last Tuesday a solicitor read us a codicil. Our friend Giulia, who was a menace and whom everyone loved, has left her last novel to my ex-husband and me jointly, on condition that we translate it from the same pages, in the same room, within six months, or nobody ever reads it in any language. She had a desk made for two people who used to argue about elbow room. On Monday we sat at it and lost twenty minutes to a semicolon, and both of us knew it was not about the semicolon.
I have never told anyone this. For two years after he moved out I went on correcting his drafts in secret, work he never asked for and never saw, and told myself it was a translator’s reflex. It wasn’t. I do not have a better word for what it was, and I am hoping the manuscript gives me one before the six months are up.
About the story
Elodie Basile translates Italian novels into English and has spent three years being the woman who does not go after people who leave rooms. Mateo Arrieta translates them into Spanish, moved to Edinburgh for her and back to Madrid after the divorce, and has never once organised what he felt about anything. They were married for eight years. They have not been in the same room since the decree.
Then Giulia Ferro, the novelist who loved them both and was a menace to everyone, dies and leaves them her last book jointly, on one condition: they translate it from the same pages, in the same room, within six months, or nobody ever reads it in any language. She has had a desk made for two people who used to argue about elbow room. Her forty pages of margin notes are addressed to E. and M. Her son will check every page. Twenty minutes into the first session they are fighting about a semicolon, and both of them know it is not about the semicolon.
Told in two voices, hers and his, between an Edinburgh study and a Turin archive, this is a second-chance romance about being understood at the sentence level by exactly one other person: a novel whose wife says the thing neither of them has said, a rule of one true sentence a session, a box neither of them wants to open, and a February date one of them has kept alone for five years. Nothing here is solved in a conversation. It takes the whole six months, and one bad week where the old habits work exactly as well as they used to, before either of them can say the sentence they have been translating around for a decade.
Content warnings
Grief · Pregnancy loss (past) · Divorce
Every chapter
Read the complete story free.
- Chapter 1The Codicil
- Chapter 2Same Table
- Chapter 3Ghost Handwriting
- Chapter 4The Empty Dedication
- Chapter 5What the Wife Says
- Chapter 6En Español
- Chapter 7Turin, Briefly
- Chapter 8Noor's Diagnosis
- Chapter 9Alasdair's Shop
- Chapter 10The Missing Chapter
- Chapter 11Renzo's Objection
- Chapter 12His Box
- Chapter 13Non Mio
- Chapter 14The Wrong Word
- Chapter 15Hotel Paper
- Chapter 16Old Habits
- Chapter 17Turin, Again
- Chapter 18Same Page