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Notes Toward a Second Language

Honora Vale

Her ex-husband is the only person who can finish their dead friend's last novel. The will says: same pages, same room, six months.

Two translators, divorced, are left a dead friend's last novel on one condition: they finish it together, in one room, in six months.

Completed · 18 chapters · 2h 59m

WarmSensual tension; intimacy fades to black.
  • Contemporary
  • Second chance
  • Slow burn

Yearning · Witty · Tender

Content warnings

Grief, Pregnancy loss (past), Divorce

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Synopsis

Elodie Basile translates Italian novels into English and has spent three years being the woman who does not go after people who leave rooms. Mateo Arrieta translates them into Spanish, moved to Edinburgh for her and back to Madrid after the divorce, and has never once organised what he felt about anything. They were married for eight years. They have not been in the same room since the decree. Then Giulia Ferro, the novelist who loved them both and was a menace to everyone, dies and leaves them her last book jointly, on one condition: they translate it from the same pages, in the same room, within six months, or nobody ever reads it in any language. She has had a desk made for two people who used to argue about elbow room. Her forty pages of margin notes are addressed to E. and M. Her son will check every page. Twenty minutes into the first session they are fighting about a semicolon, and both of them know it is not about the semicolon. Told in two voices, hers and his, between an Edinburgh study and a Turin archive, this is a second-chance romance about being understood at the sentence level by exactly one other person: a novel whose wife says the thing neither of them has said, a rule of one true sentence a session, a box neither of them wants to open, and a February date one of them has kept alone for five years. Nothing here is solved in a conversation. It takes the whole six months, and one bad week where the old habits work exactly as well as they used to, before either of them can say the sentence they have been translating around for a decade.

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There is an Italian verb,
mancare
, that turns the sentence round: not
I miss you
but
you are missing from me
, as if the absence were yours to account for and not mine to carry. I taught it in the first seminar I gave after the divorce and had to leave the room before I finished the example.

Last Tuesday a solicitor read us a codicil. Our friend Giulia, who was a menace and whom everyone loved, has left her last novel to my ex-husband and me jointly, on condition that we translate it from the same pages, in the same room, within six months, or nobody ever reads it in any language. She had a desk made for two people who used to argue about elbow room. On Monday we sat at it and lost twenty minutes to a semicolon, and both of us knew it was not about the semicolon.

I have never told anyone this. For two years after he moved out I went on correcting his drafts in secret, work he never asked for and never saw, and told myself it was a translator’s reflex. It wasn’t. I do not have a better word for what it was, and I am hoping the manuscript gives me one before the six months are up.

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    Read this if you want the wait to be about one honest sentence.

  • Contemporary romance, with the door closed

    Read this if you want two people who were married.

  • One kiss would change everything

    Slow burns where the waiting is the point

  • We were never really over

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  1. 1The Codicil9 minFree
  2. 2Same Table10 minFree
  3. 3Ghost Handwriting10 minFree
  4. 4The Empty Dedication9 minFree
  5. 5What the Wife Says8 minFree
  6. 6En Español10 min
  7. 7Turin, Briefly10 min
  8. 8Noor's Diagnosis9 min
  9. 9Alasdair's Shop9 min
  10. 10The Missing Chapter10 min
  11. 11Renzo's Objection9 min
  12. 12His Box10 min
  13. 13What He Never Sent11 min
  14. 14The Wrong Word11 min
  15. 15Silence, Named11 min
  16. 16Old Habits11 min
  17. 17Turin, Again11 min
  18. 18Same Page11 min